Our Love Revision
Posted 07-02-2015 at 03:49 PM by RotseCherut
I made a revision to my original love poem and think I may add another stanza to it, but need to rethink it all.
Our Love
I thought of you in the evening's most desolate hour
I remember your eyes and their brilliant glare
Your voice I remember as sweet as the lullaby of a dove
And your lips were as red as the blossoming roses upon the hills of Sharon
Do not depart, oh Sweet Maiden
There is relief for souls that are sorrow laden
For my desire for you is too dear
Let us reminisce in our love
And we shall not despair!
How I dream to hold you near my heart
You are a brightness shining in a world so dark
It is your love for me and my love for you
Everything is a lie
But our passion be true!
Our Love
I thought of you in the evening's most desolate hour
I remember your eyes and their brilliant glare
Your voice I remember as sweet as the lullaby of a dove
And your lips were as red as the blossoming roses upon the hills of Sharon
Do not depart, oh Sweet Maiden
There is relief for souls that are sorrow laden
For my desire for you is too dear
Let us reminisce in our love
And we shall not despair!
How I dream to hold you near my heart
You are a brightness shining in a world so dark
It is your love for me and my love for you
Everything is a lie
But our passion be true!
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