"Noah Knew" [a new song inspired by the legend of Noah (world, feelings)

[samuel cripps]

My buddy just released this song. Pretty epic!


Noah Knew [Short Version] - Gabriel Coia - YouTube

Lyrics:

Noah knew
What no one knew.
The truth would soon start raining down.

And all their delusions would shatter and cease
In the deluge, in the surging seas.
Their world, he warned, would soon be drowned.

But there were no dark clouds to be found,
And the wind, it made no sound.
And amidst the silence, laughs of scorn.
It was the calm before the storm.

No one knew
What Noah knew.
The proof would soon be all around.

And it took them by surprise
When their levees breached before their eyes.
As fast as lightning all their pride
Was brought down by the rising tide.

He'd know a new world.
Noah knew.

[Northern Matt]

Nice rhythm, but that's as good as it got. Not sure what was worse the depressing singing, hideous lyrics or the cheesy lighting and thunder in the back ground.

Tell him to keep trying as he is a good guitarist.

[samuel cripps]

Yikes!

Why do you feel that way? And why the need to express said feelings?

Originally Posted by Northern Matt

Nice rhythm, but that's as good as it got. Not sure what was worse the depressing singing, hideous lyrics or the cheesy lighting and thunder in the back ground.

Tell him to keep trying as he is a good guitarist.

[Eusebius]

Very nicely done. Do you have the chords to it?

[samuel cripps]

I'll ask him.

Originally Posted by Eusebius

Very nicely done. Do you have the chords to it?

[Northern Matt]

Originally Posted by samuel cripps

Yikes!

Why do you feel that way? And why the need to express said feelings?

Just some constructive criticism. Nothing against you or him, just not a fan of this one.

[daylux]

Originally Posted by Northern Matt

Just some constructive criticism. Nothing against you or him, just not a fan of this one.

So "hideous lyrics, cheesy lighting and thunder" is constructive how?

[samuel cripps]

Originally Posted by Northern Matt

Just some constructive criticism. Nothing against you or him, just not a fan of this one.

Nothing constructive about it whatsoever. Your criticism tells me something about you, but nothing about the music. If you want to offer some detail as to why you feel the way you do, that could be more helpful.

[samuel cripps]

Originally Posted by Eusebius

Very nicely done. Do you have the chords to it?

Gm, C9, EbMaj7, F9

[Eusebius]

Originally Posted by samuel cripps

Gm, C9, EbMaj7, F9

Thank you and please tell him he did a fantastic job.
I love how he made a play on the name Noah.

Don't mind Northern Matt.