hey..please help me now (university, bachelor degree, doctor, masters)

[vampire girl]

im just finished a bachelor's degree
and intend to take the master
i applied my degree to some university
and the ask me to write an academic paragraph about why u want to complete and take master..
and why i choose languistic or english literature.
and the statment of purpases.




please help me and write any thing for me..
im waiting....

[WeeMadArthur]

How much money are you offering?

[yayoi]

Ummm, how 'bout you write your own personal statement and then have someone proofread it for you. Your work should come from you and not anyone else. Just write the paragraph.

[Padgett2]

After you write your own statement, check your spelling and sentence structure. In your post, you really didn't do well at all!!

If you don't know the reasons why, we surely don't. What is your goal for future employment? Do you need a Masters for it?

[lastra]

Originally Posted by vampire girl

im just finished a bachelor's degree
and intend to take the master
i applied my degree to some university
and the ask me to write an academic paragraph about why u want to complete and take master..
and why i choose languistic or english literature.
and the statment of purpases.




please help me and write any thing for me..
im waiting....

As previous posts said, we don't know your goals. Write it, and we can proofread it.

[lastra]

Forgot to add, Good Luck.

[vampire girl]

thank you soooooooooo much...
yesterday i didn't sleep.
i just wrote it but im not native speaker u know.
and im a fraid if there are some mistakes..
so i'll post it hear and plzzzz
plzzzz look at it and guide me if there is a mistake:



I am Areej ; I honored to apply for the Imam University (IMSU) as a student in Master Degree. As long as I can remember when I was at first grade in college in English Literature Department I have had a love to be a teacher or a doctor there. I have graduated this year 1428H. Throughout my past four years in college I have a-three-year experience of teaching. I also took a computer diploma. That's not only my academic achievements.

If one were to ask my friends to describe me they would describe me as a very pleasant, dynamic, active and ambitious woman. I think one of my most distinguishing characteristic is the diversity of experiences I possess. I am an English literature student with a sense of art. I am a woman with technical gift and interest in computer. I also have a passion for traveling and understand different languages as French. These entire elements have given me a very broad outlook. I strongly believe that I will achieve in a place that I work in.

My bachelor Degree has given me a strong foundation in English literature and linguistic that's why I eagerly to specialize in one of them. Over the past four years, I have been working part-time I am Direct English "Al Khaleej" Center for languages and computer. I also work as a conversation teacher in Future Way Center. And I took the programming diploma in computer. Also I took the TOIEC. It has been these experiences that have shaped the person that I am today.


I believe that this unique blend of experiences has made a woman with an original point of view. This blend has given me a broader perspective to and good understanding of life and a goal to aim for. During three years of my work I taught Technical English and business venture.


I believe in myself and what I think is good for your university. and I had taken a teaching method and an effective approach for teaching. The fact that I was able to take the master and doctorate degree .because my ambition has boosted my confidence in my abilities.[/SIZE][/font]

[brittZ]

I don't mean to sound harsh, but if you have recieved a degree in English literature and linguistics, you really should have better command of the English language. What you have written is, I'm sure, honest and sincere, but poorly written from an academic standpoint. I would suggest you find a tutor who can help you translate from your primary languge thought process to academic English writting. It is difficult to translate from a primary language to secondary language - especially in an academic setting. This should be your first goal.

[vampire girl]

Originally Posted by brittZ

I don't mean to sound harsh, but if you have recieved a degree in English literature and linguistics, you really should have better command of the English language. What you have written is, I'm sure, honest and sincere, but poorly written from an academic standpoint. I would suggest you find a tutor who can help you translate from your primary languge thought process to academic English writting. It is difficult to translate from a primary language to secondary language - especially in an academic setting. This should be your first goal.

what 's that suppossed to mean???
is it bad??
u mean i can't give it to them in that way??
or what?
if u have a comment plz post it here

[Padgett2]

I think that anyone reading your post on this forum would assume that you were applying to an American University. The IMAN University is in Yemen, isn't it? If that is where you are applying, we are probably not going to be able to give you good advice.

If, however, you are applying to an American University, you need to first write and ask for an application.

You use computer short hand instead of standard english. This is not good. You should spell out YOU instead of just using 'u' and PLEASE instead of pizz.