Relationship Chat Thread #17 (guy, sexy, best, like)

[*Sixy*]

Originally Posted by SifuPhil

His gleaming pectorals on view inside of his billowing white shirt, Robespierre carefully attached the POS cable to the positive terminal. His sinewy arms, long-used to heavy manual labor, flexed as he squeezed the clamp with a strong yet still-erotic pressure, leaving her bosom heaving ...

LMAO...too technical still!

[Prince_Frog]

Originally Posted by SifuPhil

His gleaming pectorals on view inside of his billowing white shirt, Robespierre carefully attached the POS cable to the positive terminal. His sinewy arms, long-used to heavy manual labor, flexed as he squeezed the clamp with a strong yet still-erotic pressure, leaving her bosom heaving ...

I swear I just read part of a romantic novel.

[SifuPhil]

Originally Posted by justthe6ofus

LMAO...too technical still!

EDIT #1:

Robespierre had a big c*ck.

As he bent over the hood of the broken vehicle, his pet rooster strutted around, pecking at invisible bits of dust in the road ...

[*Sixy*]

Originally Posted by SifuPhil

EDIT #1:

Robespierre had a big c*ck.

As he bent over the hood of the broken vehicle, his pet rooster strutted around, pecking at invisible bits of dust in the road ...

Nope...still not there...too much info now...keep trying

[Thursday007]

Originally Posted by SifuPhil

EDIT #1:

Robespierre had a big c*ck.

As he bent over the hood of the broken vehicle, his pet rooster strutted around, pecking at invisible bits of dust in the road ...

You are starting to write like a Harlequin romance novel.

[SifuPhil]

Originally Posted by justthe6ofus

Nope...still not there...too much info now...keep trying

EDIT #2:

The dark stranger wore neutral-colored clothing. He was an enigma, saying nothing and showing no emotion. He was a cypher, an unknown quantity, and as he worked on The Car With No Name he ...

NOTE PENCILED IN MARGIN: You DID say TMI, right?

[*Sixy*]

Originally Posted by SifuPhil

EDIT #2:

The dark stranger wore neutral-colored clothing. He was an enigma, saying nothing and showing no emotion. He was a cypher, an unknown quantity, and as he worked on The Car With No Name he ...

NOTE PENCILED IN MARGIN: You DID say TMI, right?

Okay smartass! lol

But I do like "the dark stranger" so let's pair that with "bent over the hood of the broken vehicle" from Edit #1 and then "he squeezed the clamp with a strong yet still-erotic pressure, leaving her bosom heaving ..."

THERE you go! perfect!

[SifuPhil]

Originally Posted by justthe6ofus

Okay smartass! lol

But I do like "the dark stranger" so let's pair that with "bent over the hood of the broken vehicle" from Edit #1 and then "he squeezed the clamp with a strong yet still-erotic pressure, leaving her bosom heaving ..."

THERE you go! perfect!

The broken vehicle was parked on top of the dark stranger, squeezing his bosom with great pressure. Yet, while clamped, he still felt erotic.

MARGIN NOTE: Sorry - hitting the bong early tonight. Maybe I should do a rewrite tomorrow.

[*Sixy*]

Originally Posted by SifuPhil

The broken vehicle was parked on top of the dark stranger, squeezing his bosom with great pressure. Yet, while clamped, he still felt erotic.

MARGIN NOTE: Sorry - hitting the bong early tonight. Maybe I should do a rewrite tomorrow.

Hmmm, a little S&M twist to this story?

[Prince_Frog]

Originally Posted by SifuPhil

The broken vehicle was parked on top of the dark stranger, squeezing his bosom with great pressure. Yet, while clamped, he still felt erotic.

MARGIN NOTE: Sorry - hitting the bong early tonight. Maybe I should do a rewrite tomorrow.

No, this is your best piece yet. You should continue on with what you posted here.