Let me know what you think of this email i sent to this beautiful Asian girl on POF.Do you think it's unique? (wife, married)

[srjth]

Originally Posted by DiscombobulateYa

I just want to see if it will get her attention,and then I will get more serious from there.

you should write her a roses are red, violets are blue poem.

[GoCUBS1]

For me, NO

Trying too hard.

Save the Shakespearean eloquence until you get to know her.

O twinkles...me sprinkles. (don't like when men say twinkles or sprinkles)

Fret not thy self upon the unimportant wrinkles. (saying she has wrinkles? NOT GOOD)

Is this fine Asian prepared for this Caucasian Invasion. (Too much race talk, Invasion is a bad word choice)

This here fly yummy-script have I prepared for thee... (Don't like when men say yummy)

Tis the season to be jolly. (Don't like when men say jolly)

Oh my goodness golly... (Don't like when men say goodness golly)

Hi there... my name is ***** (Yes, I like that)

[DiscombobulateYa]

Originally Posted by Lilac110

Mid-40s, and I can promise you that if that woman has both half a brain and a blog, your ditty will be mocked on it mercilessly.

Wow...just relax a little bit. I was just trying to have some fun....It's cool though, I did ask people what they think.lol

[DiscombobulateYa]

Originally Posted by GoCUBS1

For me, NO

Trying too hard.

Save the Shakespearean eloquence until you get to know her.

O twinkles...me sprinkles. (don't like when men say twinkles or sprinkles)

Fret not thy self upon the unimportant wrinkles. (saying she has wrinkles? NOT GOOD)

Is this fine Asian prepared for this Caucasian Invasion. (Too much race talk, Invasion is a bad word choice)

This here fly yummy-script have I prepared for thee... (Don't like when men say yummy)

Tis the season to be jolly. (Don't like when men say jolly)

Oh my goodness golly... (Don't like when men say goodness golly)

Hi there... my name is ***** (Yes, I like that)

She didn't have any wrinkles...her face is FLAWLESS. It just rhymed so I used it.

[lovesMountains]

Originally Posted by DiscombobulateYa

She didn't have any wrinkles...her face is FLAWLESS. It just rhymed so I used it.

yeah, but just saying it kind of implies you think she does

i'm all for doing something kind of cute, but half this long at most.

[97701]

Sounds really stupid.

[FBJ]

Originally Posted by DiscombobulateYa

O twinkles...me sprinkles. Fret not thy self upon the unimportant wrinkles. Is this fine Asian prepared for this Caucasian Invasion. Half past your inward heart-throb persuasion. This here fly yummy-script have I prepared for thee...on this occasion. Yes that it Tis the season to be jolly. Let me not entice thee with this here...mere folly. Like a swift echo in mid-thin air...Oh my goodness golly... I do declare. I really do like your hair...your eye's are far beyond the extra-ordinary stare...I swear. Hi there... my name is *****.

MAJOR FAIL.

1. Too long

2. Too silly

3. Trying to hard


The End

[DiscombobulateYa]

Originally Posted by WestPhillyDude75

MAJOR FAIL.

1. Too long

2. Too silly

3. Trying to hard


The End

lOL..iT is silly. But she said she loves to laugh in her profile. So I was actually trying to be silly...

[krazykatlady]

Dude.....just no.

[FBJ]

Originally Posted by DiscombobulateYa

lOL..iT is silly. But she said she loves to laugh in her profile. So I was actually trying to be silly...

Try and make her laugh on the PHONE or FACE TO FACE not over email.