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sounds fine.
In my opinion it's very generic, very commonplace, nothing is out of the ordinary.
That may be who you are and who you want to attract, so I say good luck fishing.
Say who you are, and what you hope to find. But keep in mind, your photos and your weight/body type are the 800lb gorillas in the room.
I just want to know if this sounds okay, or if I need to add anything or leave anything out. I'm trying not to be picky or have unrealistic expectations. I didn't want to sound negative or put any obvious traits like honesty. This is what I wrote:
I'm looking for a man who is sure of what he wants in life, in a woman, and in a relationship. I want a guy who is ready to be in a relationship and wants a long term relationship and who eventually wants to get married one day. I like a guy with a big heart, who has a great sense of humor, who can keep his word and knows that actions speak louder than words, takes initiative, listens, believes in God, and is humble.
Sorry I think it is bit scaring people to be honest. And they get the impression that you are woman with lot of rules that men wont interested in. Just drop it with bit of humor. When I dropped like this I got no responses at the end I dropped Eva is looking for Adam! that is it since then I got many replies.
Your profile is there to tell about YOU. So you need to write things that will attract men TO you so they want to get to know you, not scare them off.
Besides, what guy is going to read what you wrote and think, "Well, I would message her but I don't have a big heart." And every guy thinks he has a great sense of humor. You won't actually know whether YOU like it until you get to know him.
So focus on YOU and what's lovable about you.
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