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Old 04-03-2013, 04:21 PM
 
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I have a short cover letter, with 3 short paragraphs, and all the sentences have the word 'I' in them. They don't all start with 'I', but they have it either at the start or middle of the sentence and I think it's very noticeable. If I change the wording, it would sound very unnatural. Do you think it's okay?
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Old 04-03-2013, 04:28 PM
 
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Nope, go online for some examples.
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Old 04-03-2013, 04:57 PM
 
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Agreed. You need to mix it up. Part of a cover letter is demonstrating your ability to write, and it sounds as if your current cover letter does not do his well.
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