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I want you guys to help me edit and correct any grammar errors that you guys see!
BTW, I am going to e-mail!
I didn't know that I was suppose to send a thank you note within 24 hours, but it has been at least week since the interview, so what should I do?
Subject Line of Email Message:
Thank You-Valet Interview
Email Message:
Dear Mr.Randall:
It was very enjoyable to speak with you about the valet position at the Lexus of Wayzata. The job seems to be an excellent match for my skills and interests. The on hands training that you described for the valet position confirmed my desire to work with you.
In addition to my enthusiasm, I will bring to the position my assertiveness, hard work ethics, and the ability to encourage others to work cooperatively with the department.
I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you regarding this position.
If it has been a week and you haven't heard anything I would start the email off by stating that the purpose of your email is to express your continued interest in the position and indicate that you would like to know if the position is still available. I would say something like, if the position is still indeed available then..........the rest of what you typed.
I want you guys to help me edit and correct any grammar errors that you guys see!
BTW, I am going to e-mail!
I didn't know that I was suppose to send a thank you note within 24 hours, but it has been at least week since the interview, so what should I do?
Subject Line of Email Message:
Thank You-Valet Interview
Email Message:
Dear Mr.Randall:
It was very enjoyable to speak with you about the valet position at the Lexus of Wayzata. The job seems to be an excellent match for my skills and interests. The on hands training that you described for the valet position confirmed my desire to work with you.
In addition to my enthusiasm, I will bring to the position my assertiveness, hard work ethics, and the ability to encourage others to work cooperatively with the department.
I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you regarding this position.
Sincerely,
Personal Information!
Here's how I would edit this (assuming you have not sent it out yet!)
Dear Mr. Randall,
Thank you for spending the time with me last (date) regarding the valet position at [ ]. After speaking with you, I believe that the opportunity is indeed an excellent match with my skills and long-term career interests. I am excited at the prospect of working with you and your team. I look at this as an excellent opportunity to apply my team building skills and bring to the table my professional work ethics and enthusiasm for the job.
Please contact me if you need additional information. I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
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