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Old 10-07-2009, 02:16 PM
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Default Describe your novel in one sentence.

Okay, this thread comes from the advice Flo Ziegfeld used to give people: If you can't write your idea on the back of a business card, you don't have an idea.

When you go to pitch conferences, many agents will have the same viewpoint, wanting the skinny on your novel in just a few words.

So what's yours? Here's my one-sentence description:

A man copes with the death of his wife by attending the funerals of strangers.
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I have always heard one paragraph, not one sentence, though I don't have a credit for that; I believe it was part of the "snowflake method". (I believe the idea was first, one paragraph; next, what the book jacket would say.)

Mine would be:

From beyond the grave, the true limits of a mother's love are tested. Who will raise Phoebe--the woman who lost her to tragedy, or the one that carries her now?
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A man copes with the death of his wife by attending the funerals of strangers.
Completely fascinating, BTW. That's just the kind of book I'd read!
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Okay, this thread comes from the advice Flo Ziegfeld used to give people: If you can't write your idea on the back of a business card, you don't have an idea.

When you go to pitch conferences, many agents will have the same viewpoint, wanting the skinny on your novel in just a few words.

So what's yours? Here's my one-sentence description:

A man copes with the death of his wife by attending the funerals of strangers.
Almost like Harold & Maude... which could use a good remake.

I say: write your book & make your own screenplay. When it gets produced: I'll buy a ticket & I'll read the book first cuz the book is usually better.

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