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Old 08-31-2012, 10:01 AM
 
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[url]www.scribd.com/doc/104433428/Yooooo[/url]

I'm getting laid off from my job in September so I figure its time to tweek it. My focus is more on the wording itself then the actual layout. When i uploaded this from Microsoft work to scribd, it messed up the layout so disregard that.

Do you think I could make it more concise? Expand parts more? any thoughts would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.

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Old 08-31-2012, 10:28 AM
 
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It looks good to me.
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