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Old 08-09-2011, 05:28 PM
 
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Lots of overpersonalization / questionable choices -- needs editing BIG TIME. I agree that the narration "drones". You want to have something that "draws people in" not merely catalogs the endless list of stuff that the sellers have done to make this "their own vision"...

That night time view of the valley around the 10 minute is pretty amazing but I don't know how many folks would be thrilled about the FULL BOATLOAD of "merlot" kitchen and laundry appliances. Yellow brass looks real outdated to my eye.

OTOH the outside kitchen and patio looks kind of amazing, but no pool? And why give away the address / moniker? Not smart, maybe not very safe either...

I know a couple of people with amazing skills in shooting stills / videos and then putting that into a "tour" that really is a nice "tease" instead of catalog of every detail -- PARE DOWN!
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Old 08-09-2011, 06:52 PM
 
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I'm a stickler for laguage......

It's "AN" Eco Friendly Retreat.

Vid is too long, and lacks 'rich' color which might enhance an otherwise attractive property.
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Old 08-10-2011, 02:57 PM
 
Location: Morrisville
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you can do the same kind of presentation using a PC and the free program that comes with it called moviemaker
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Old 08-10-2011, 05:05 PM
 
Location: Mokelumne Hill, CA & El Pescadero, BCS MX.
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You guys are awesome. Thanks so much for the feedback which mirrors my own opinion pretty well. I think we'll be making a "trailer" for the blockbuster movie.

Thanks so much and any further comments are very very welcome.
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