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Old 12-03-2012, 04:54 AM
 
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Hi everybody! I want to submit you my translation of poem of Alexandr Delphinov who is a Russian modern poet. Evaluate !

Bitter

My mental health is in disagreement.
All that I used to live deeply slam.
Body transformed into doddery cement
I am like Lenin prior Mausoleum.

And you are in love with a popular artist,
You don`t observe me from large eminence.
Even communists weren`t so torment by fascists
Until the Great Patriotic War ends.

I gave you any fun things and flowers
There are rubber gnome and an air balloon.
But you were making some strange sounds.
You didn`t wish to snog with me soon.

You stopped call me for a visit at last
And laughed with widely open mouth.
I was quaking in boots without the rest,
Wiping cold sweat by sleeve near your house.

I decided to kill you raping right in the tog.
I sharpened a knife and hid in pouch well.
I sat in your doorway in demented hope
To catch up on this tragic novel.

But you again broke all my plans
You were able to deal with me less the knife
Your narcotic drug-addict disgusting friends
Every evening saw off you on your side.

How can I be? All values have lost general
My youth is rolling under the splay
Every night I dream of Anna Karenina
Who jumped with hoarse shout under steam train.

Darling! Perhaps having read this confessional
You`ll fathom that acted is not rather well
That I`m alive person I don`t gyps material
And heart in my chest instead any jar.

Last edited by Maria Stefanec; 12-03-2012 at 05:20 AM..
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Old 12-04-2012, 01:19 AM
 
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I`m just a student of high school and this translation is part of my work for research conference. I`m not a professional translator so don`t judge too strictly )) I just want to acquaint you with the creativity of our contemporary who`s from other country .
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