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Old 06-28-2011, 10:58 AM
 
Location: The Hall of Justice
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Absolutely. Try to keep them in agreement, as in my rewrite for that sentence in a previous post. However, I've never been a big fan of the "and but" conjunction.
Ha! Sometimes the cobbler's shoes have holes, too.
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Old 06-28-2011, 11:45 AM
 
Location: Richardson, TX
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Ha! Sometimes the cobbler's shoes have holes, too.
It was probably just a remnant of an edit.
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Old 07-06-2011, 05:54 PM
 
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Why are you all putting a comma brfore 'which'? A comma goes before 'which' only when the following information is unnecessary to the meaning of the sentence. In this case the information is absolutely pertinent to the sentence so does not require a comma after 'projects.'
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Old 07-08-2011, 09:10 AM
 
Location: New York City
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Why are you all putting a comma brfore 'which'? A comma goes before 'which' only when the following information is unnecessary to the meaning of the sentence. In this case the information is absolutely pertinent to the sentence so does not require a comma after 'projects.'
It’s about restrictive vs. non-restrictive clauses. Non-restrictive clauses require a comma. Restrictive clauses are necessary to the subject of the sentence, not the sense of the sentence as a whole.

“They have raised funds to assist in our charitable projects, which have included …” is non-restrictive because “They have raised funds to assist in our charitable projects” could stand alone. The object of the sentence is “to assist in our charitable projects;” everything else is elaboration.

To make it restrictive it would have to be “They raised funds that were used for building a house ...” The phrase “that were used for building a house” is restrictive because it is the object of the sentence. It limits or restricts the meaning of the subject.

The word “which” commonly indicates a non-restrictive clause and is usually preceded by a comma.
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Old 07-08-2011, 09:47 AM
 
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Why are you all putting a comma brfore 'which'? A comma goes before 'which' only when the following information is unnecessary to the meaning of the sentence. In this case the information is absolutely pertinent to the sentence so does not require a comma after 'projects.'
Hmm, I learned that a "which" clause gets a comma. If it doesn't need a comma and is necessary to the sentence, it should be substituted with "that". Example:

They have raised funds to assist in our charitable projects that have included building a house, renovating a facility for homeless children...
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Old 07-11-2011, 09:31 AM
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Which witches 'wich?
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Old 07-13-2011, 08:06 PM
 
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Sorry I was taught the other Way!
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