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Old 02-23-2009, 02:12 PM
 
Location: southern california
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Old 02-23-2009, 02:21 PM
 
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avec doreen leverette

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Old 02-23-2009, 05:17 PM
 
Location: Farmland side of the mountain
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They are all beautiful but this one's my favorite.
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Old 02-23-2009, 08:41 PM
 
Location: Moved to town. Miss 'my' woods and critters.
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I really like these, Huck. Very pretty.
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Old 02-23-2009, 08:52 PM
 
Location: California
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that looks so real! look as if it's right there in front of you!
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Old 02-23-2009, 09:25 PM
 
Location: Sacramento, Ca
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OK guys. This thread is for all of you to show off your creative side. Don't be shy. Post your poetry, prose, drawings, pictures of crafts, hobbies etc. Anything and everything you do that shows your creative side. Get the recognition you deserve. This was agreed upon as a good idea so I said I would start it. Now it's your turn. I'll start with another poem I wrote.


A WHISPER IN THE WIND

She hears her name spoken softly in the dark
Sweeter then the sound of a meadowlark
Turning around to find him, searching for his face
In that lonely empty space
It’s just a whisper in the wind

Her heart beats like the pounding of a drum
Tears fill her dark eyes, she is overcome
She begins to tremble and falls to her knees
Listens for a sound on the breeze
A single whisper in the wind

In reality she knows he was never here
She closes her eyes, tries to draw him near
Wills her heart from her body into the night
He shines for her like a blinding light
She’s just a whisper in the wind

In her mind she finds him, two hearts join as one
If only for a while they lay out in the sun
Joyful in the joining like a soft melody
Love lifts them up, sets them free
Like a gentle whisper in the wind

She feels the pull as her body calls her heart
Time and distance pulling them apart
Holding on, she can’t let go
Of love and joy she’s come to know
Nothing but a whisper in the wind

Soon she loses sight of him in a distant mist
A fading memory, a feeling, a kiss
Drifting away, her vision becomes dim
With a lonely tear, calls out to him
Sends a whisper in the wind


Ok, next?

Just a little somthing that I thought you might appreciate

REMEMBER THE GOOD
BY Deborah Schwartzhoff

I sit here reminiscing, EYES closed
And MEMORIES floating,
Slide show after slide show
Filling my
Heart and Mind with pleasure.
Like a RUSHING RIVER,
The many ups and downs
Of emothions colliding into the rocks and
Smothing through the valley's of my mind.
I come to the realization THAT THE LORD,
Within his greater power and design,
Has BLESSED ME WITH THE GREATEST THING!
LIFE! A LIFE FULL OF CHANGE
AND CHALLENGE Followed by EXCITEMENT and the
LOVE of FAMILY and FRIENDS,
And rewarding ADVENTURES,
Flash after flash and time after time!
The knowledge that tomorow will bring something
REFRESHINGLY new. and letting go of,
but not forgetting something old,
is one of our creators greatest gifts.
How could we ask for more?
The Cycle of LIFE IS a TITANIC LIKE WONDER

i HOPE YOU ENJOY! THANK YOU FOR READING

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