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Old 05-28-2009, 07:33 PM
ECG
 
Location: In the minds of others
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Here is another from my archives...Hope everyone enjoys!!

Million Goodbyes .....................................By ECG1951

I have seen you a million times
And every time I see you
I fall in love with you all over again
My heart starts to race
My frown turns into a smile
And all my worries are now in my past
When you smile at me my heart melts
You give the sweetest hugs
Every time you hug me
Your smile is like a new day
Your sense of humor is like no other
The ability you have to make me smile
Is all you need you love me
Your laugh is so soft and sweet
Just looking in your eyes
Makes me melt inside
Your lips look so soft
Soft enough to kiss
You, yourself relive me from all pain
Your hands are as soft as a pillow
The way you comfort me is amazing
Every time we say good-bye
I start to cry
I say good-bye to you too many times
I said good-bye to you a million times
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Old 05-28-2009, 08:08 PM
 
Location: California
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Wow! love it!
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Old 05-28-2009, 08:10 PM
ECG
 
Location: In the minds of others
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Thank You VillageLife!!
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Old 05-28-2009, 08:13 PM
 
Location: southern california
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First Kiss...by Pocono Proud


[CENTER]First Kiss

I notice you, noticing me.
We lock in a gaze from which we can’t break free.
I want to entice you, with only my eyes ~
And the language of your body tells me no lies.

Magnetized, I’m drawn to you.
You stand to greet me, as if on cue.
This instant attraction is the spark for our fire ~
No one can extinguish these flames of desire.
The world falls away, as we explore the way we feel,
I try not to question the instant appeal.
I never thought I’d fall in love tonight,
But the magic is with us ~ and the time is right.

Here we are ~ face to face;
Awaiting the moment our lips will embrace.
I am excited & nervous & completely at ease,
As we show each other that we’re eager to please.
First hard, then tender ~ and alive with anticipation ~
Our first kiss is sheer exhilaration![CENTER]
thats a good one.
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Old 05-28-2009, 08:14 PM
 
Location: southern california
61,288 posts, read 87,431,754 times
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Originally Posted by ECG1951 View Post
Here is another from my archives...Hope everyone enjoys!!

Million Goodbyes .....................................By ECG1951

I have seen you a million times
And every time I see you
I fall in love with you all over again
My heart starts to race
My frown turns into a smile
And all my worries are now in my past
When you smile at me my heart melts
You give the sweetest hugs
Every time you hug me
Your smile is like a new day
Your sense of humor is like no other
The ability you have to make me smile
Is all you need you love me
Your laugh is so soft and sweet
Just looking in your eyes
Makes me melt inside
Your lips look so soft
Soft enough to kiss
You, yourself relive me from all pain
Your hands are as soft as a pillow
The way you comfort me is amazing
Every time we say good-bye
I start to cry
I say good-bye to you too many times
I said good-bye to you a million times
another good one.
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Old 05-29-2009, 03:08 PM
 
Location: southern california
61,288 posts, read 87,431,754 times
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ECG1951 View Post
Here is another from my archives...Hope everyone enjoys!!

Million Goodbyes .....................................By ECG1951

I have seen you a million times
And every time I see you
I fall in love with you all over again
My heart starts to race
My frown turns into a smile
And all my worries are now in my past
When you smile at me my heart melts
You give the sweetest hugs
Every time you hug me
Your smile is like a new day
Your sense of humor is like no other
The ability you have to make me smile
Is all you need you love me
Your laugh is so soft and sweet
Just looking in your eyes
Makes me melt inside
Your lips look so soft
Soft enough to kiss
You, yourself relive me from all pain
Your hands are as soft as a pillow
The way you comfort me is amazing
Every time we say good-bye
I start to cry
I say good-bye to you too many times
I said good-bye to you a million times
good job.
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Old 05-29-2009, 03:09 PM
 
Location: southern california
61,288 posts, read 87,431,754 times
Reputation: 55562
Quote:
Originally Posted by poconoproud View Post
First Kiss...by Pocono Proud


[CENTER]First Kiss

I notice you, noticing me.
We lock in a gaze from which we can’t break free.
I want to entice you, with only my eyes ~
And the language of your body tells me no lies.

Magnetized, I’m drawn to you.
You stand to greet me, as if on cue.
This instant attraction is the spark for our fire ~
No one can extinguish these flames of desire.
The world falls away, as we explore the way we feel,
I try not to question the instant appeal.
I never thought I’d fall in love tonight,
But the magic is with us ~ and the time is right.

Here we are ~ face to face;
Awaiting the moment our lips will embrace.
I am excited & nervous & completely at ease,
As we show each other that we’re eager to please.
First hard, then tender ~ and alive with anticipation ~
Our first kiss is sheer exhilaration![CENTER]
good job.
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Old 05-29-2009, 04:02 PM
ECG
 
Location: In the minds of others
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Thank you...Glad you like them Huck!!!!
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Old 05-30-2009, 06:14 AM
Gue
 
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Terrific poetry!
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Old 05-30-2009, 06:13 PM
ECG
 
Location: In the minds of others
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Is it you? ..............................................By ECG1951

In this world full of hurt and pain,
I need someone who would help me through the rain.
To comfort me when Im sad,
Doing everything just to make me glad.

In this world I need a Brave Knight,
Who would never give up any fight.
A knight who would dry away my tears,
Telling me to overcome my fears.

A knight who loves me for who I am inside,
With him there's nothing more I need to hide.
A person who will still be standing strong,
Even though everything has gone wrong.

I need someone who is willing to give me more,
Someone I can call my Knight In Shining Armor.
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