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Old 10-18-2009, 08:44 AM
 
Location: ST paul MN
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write stories, chain style, you know when one person writes about followed by another person, on and on.


First I'll start.


It was dark for years the children where told that the house was haunted. Everyone knew the witches ghost from a 17th century witch hunt still prowled the eerie darkness of the dilapidated home. Sera being the boldest of the 4 kids had gone over to the house on a whim of curiosity she seen a shattered window along with gory details in a full moons light, one look was all it took, to send her running away, screaming in fear. Later on gasping she told the others gathered around her what she had witnessed.

"B..B..B..B.. Blood, on a broken window all over. a..a..a little boys broken head hanging , ravens/crows.... some big black birds feeding on scraps in the lawn and th...".

they cried, then after cutting her off they responded to her. "Are you sure you saw what you saw?" Billy interjected. "Positive" "And... and the witch.. did... did you see her?" "No but I heard muffled laughter as if someone was in the old house.. waiting... for more victims",

John looked to Billy and then to Sera who was crying softly under the moonlit shadows. "Then we've got to tell someone about this our parents.. the.. the police, report this and then.. never go back there again!",

"but John... brother, you know no ones lived in that house for over three hundred years, its all weedy and messed up. They would never believe you. We must go warn the kids at school about the murder and the evil ghost that committed it",
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