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This was actually very cleverly funny (the writing) and you're a handsome man but 1. it should be WAY shorter...snap it up. 2. Your pictures all look really ANGRY and confrontational. You're handsome but honestly, there's no way on earth I'd ever answer an ad with a dude who looked like he wanted to beat the hell out of me...just being 100% honest there. OTOH I don't know what sort of woman you're trying to attract. And maybe I'm just old and out of the loop and girls like that now...I don't know. Just giving my own input.
But as to the idea, it is FUNNY...if the guy pictured were able to crack a smile I'd probably answer the ad.
+1.
My thoughts exactly. It's clever, but could be better executed. The animated woman is creepy looking. Is there a less creepy option?
Your not out of the loop, the "dark , brooding, angsty" persona that worked so well for me in my teens and 20's seems off putting to many, but I have been doing it so long that when I try to make smiling photos I think I look ugly in them. smiling makes my cheeks puff out in a way that my jawline looks less defined and amplifies the negroid side of my gene-pool while watering down my french eyes and native jawline.
I end up looking like shriek dipped in chocolate.
My thoughts exactly. It's clever, but could be better executed. The animated woman is creepy looking. Is there a less creepy option?
Funny you mention that, all my animations come from real photos, and sadly the best photo's to use are mugshots(because they are looking straight at the camera.), the basis for that model was a woman arrested for prostitution in Ohio.
Also mugshots are public domain so no legal issues.
The writing of the video was clever, but the pics don't match.
Ditch the hoodie and sunglasses. If you can dress up to accompany someone to the mall, then do that now. Can you give a big cheesy smile and show your teeth? Can you have someone take your picture, preferably outside.
The times you mention "call now" sounds kinda desperate, and you don't give a phone number so it's a pointless comment. Perhaps mention look forward to your email, or something like that.
I also vote the animated character is creepy as hell. Ditch her all together and just have a voice over.
That is the hard part, I find many TYPES of women attractive though I do gravitate toward alternative women, Goth, Rockabilly, Grunge etc etc...
And I have a thing for tattoos and such.
But personality wise I want someone who views relationships in a traditional way. as in monogamy, being AND acting faithful. meaning I'm not into poly or women who are flirty with other guys.
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