"Moving on" letter..............Suggestions welcome :-)

[Evidence-is-key]

The finishing touches are certainly appreciated JTGJR. thank you.

Any other suggestions anyone?

[sayulita]

Just a couple more tweaks. In red.

Originally Posted by JTGJR

Dear Friends and Colleagues:

As a number of you are aware, this Friday will mark the end of my 5.5 years with xx.
I have enjoyed working for xx and I appreciate having had this wonderful opportunity to work with each of you. The years spent with xx have been challenging and fulfilling and that has made my decision that much harder to make. I’ve always taken pride in the goals (delete "that") we set out to accomplish together and will miss working with you. I wish you all the best in the future and I thank you (delete "again") for your support and continued friendship.

Please keep in touch. I can be reached at my personal email address (xx) or on the cell at XX

Warm regards,

XX

[hellohelloworld]

Originally Posted by sayulita

Just a couple more tweaks. In red.

thank you so much.
here's what i have so far Everyone!!
Any further suggestion are welcome. Deadline coming up :-)


Dear Friends and Colleagues:

As a number of you are aware, this Friday will mark the end of my 5.5 years with xx.
I have enjoyed working for xx and I appreciate having had this wonderful opportunity to work with each of you. The years spent with xx have been challenging and fulfilling and that has made my decision that much harder to make. I’ve always taken pride in the goalswe set out to accomplish together and will miss working with you. I wish you all the best in the future and I thank you for your support and continued friendship.

Please keep in touch. I can be reached at my personal email address (xx) or on the cell at XX

Warm regards,

XX

[sayulita]

Just one more (marked in red). Otherwise, it's a winner!

Originally Posted by hellohelloworld

thank you so much.
here's what i have so far Everyone!!
Any further suggestion are welcome. Deadline coming up :-)

Dear Friends and Colleagues:

As a number of you are aware, this Friday will mark the end of my 5.5 years with xx.
I have enjoyed working for xx and I appreciate having had this wonderful opportunity to work with each of you. My years here have been challenging and fulfilling and that has made my decision that much harder to make. I’ve always taken pride in the goals we set out to accomplish together and will miss working with you. I wish you all the best in the future and I thank you for your support and continued friendship.

Please keep in touch. I can be reached at my personal email address (xx) or on the cell at XX

Warm regards,

XX