Is my online dating profile good? (men, love, single, younger)

[MissSunshine2020]

I would like feedback on my online dating profile. Do you think it's good or should I be a little less direct?

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I'm funny, witty, intelligent, kind heart-ed, caring, ambitious, loving, dependable, sweet, (a little shy) and other nice adjectives.

A little additional Information about me:

1. I'm a spiritual person. I try to do good, each and every day.

2. I love to travel; I've visited countries in West Africa, Northern Europe, the Caribbean, Canada and many states within the U. S. I'm looking forward to venturing to China and South Africa in 2015.

3. I enjoy eating healthy and I try to maintain a stress free, active lifestyle. I do not smoke or drink and recently I cut out sugarcane from my diet. It was far easier than I initially thought it would be, probably because I tend to cook a lot of my own meals.

4. Although I like children, I must admit that I enjoy not having any, because I'm able to focus much of my spare time (and resources) towards my own self development.

5. I really enjoy taking very long walks/hikes, camping, reading, painting still life, photography, blogging, cooking, dining out at healthy establishments, visiting family, and spending time with my pet.

6. At times, I enjoy solitude, but I also like being around thoughtful, intelligent and creative people who lead very healthy lifestyles.

7. I rarely watch TV.

8. I'm rarely bored.

9. I love being around diverse cultures and learning new things.

10. I'm often told that I look much younger than my actual age.

11. I have no political affiliations or leanings towards democrats or republicans...

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[oh-eve]

Sounds a little bit like a resume

[hawaiiancoconut]

sounds good, but how old are you?

[timberline742]

It doesn't say anything you're really passionate about. Lots of the stuff is rather vague, some cliche. It's a cast a wide net profile with peculiarities.

It says nothing about what you're looking for.

[MissSunshine2020]

Originally Posted by hawaiiancoconut

sounds good, but how old are you?

I'm 39. I am wondering if my profile is a little too technical.

[oh-eve]

I would leave out 6.-11.

[MissSunshine2020]

Originally Posted by timberline742

It doesn't say anything you're really passionate about. Lots of the stuff is rather vague, some cliche. It's a cast a wide net profile with peculiarities.

It says nothing about what you're looking for.

I only posted the information in my "about me section." There is another section where I post, what I am looking for.

I've included it below:
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I'm looking for a (27 - 37 year old) single, heterosexual, intelligent/professional, physically fit, health conscious, morally grounded man who resides in the same city. I like all colors/ethnic backgrounds.

I do like children, but I prefer a mate who doesn't have any.

Thanks in advance for taking the time to read my profile.
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[hawaiiancoconut]

Originally Posted by MissSunshine2020

I'm 39. I am wondering if my profile is a little too technical.

Its too much for men to read. A few full body photo's, age and your stance on children is all you need.

[timberline742]

Originally Posted by MissSunshine2020

I only posted the information in my "about me section." There is another section where I post, what I am looking for.

I've included it below:
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I'm looking for a (27 - 37 year old) single, heterosexual, intelligent/professional, physically fit, health conscious, morally grounded man who resides in the same city. I like all colors/ethnic backgrounds.

I do like children, but I prefer a mate who doesn't have any.

Thanks in advance for taking the time to read my profile.
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This also says nothing. Basically a single straight guy within a 10 year range. Absolutely not helpful. And dump the word "mate".

[MissSunshine2020]

Originally Posted by oh-eve

I would leave out 6.-11.

Thanks for the advice. I agree, I shouldn't have included those details. I deleted that section.