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Old 12-04-2007, 06:56 PM
 
Location: Another Day Closer
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I BELIEVE

I often sit and wonder
What will become of me
I can doubt my wisdom
This quest to be free

People can tell me
I must have lost my mind
I don’t have a guarantee
No certainty of any kind

Tell me, hey girl what
Are you thinking
Leaving everything behind
Your little world is shrinking

You’ve worked hard all
These years making
A decent future for yourself
Hard times; giving and taking

But my ears don’t hear them
All I hear is you
Telling me you love me
I just believe in you

Eyes blinded by your face
It’s the only thing I see
Your smile, your eyes; I know
You wait for me

Heaven knows how long
Till I can be with you
My heart is waiting to
Know love that’s true

You’ve crossed your heart
Made a promise to me
That you’ll find a way to come
Soon as you are free

I felt love in your arms
Seen longing in your eyes
Heard words you whispered
Remembered sighs

I’ll gladly leave everything
Take enough to see me through
Jump into that great unknown
Cause I believe in you
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Old 12-05-2007, 06:40 AM
 
Location: Pocono Mts.
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I Believe.... that I love your work! It is so hard to put our feelings into words, but you do so beautifully. I'll look forward to your next inspired piece.
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Old 12-05-2007, 02:20 PM
 
Location: Another Day Closer
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Thank you very much poconoproud!
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Old 12-05-2007, 03:50 PM
 
Location: Sunshine N'Blue Skies
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NCGirl.........that is really great. Great poet..........
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Old 12-05-2007, 04:45 PM
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That's very nice NCG...I can visualize you writing this with someone 'special' in mind...
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Old 12-05-2007, 05:17 PM
 
Location: Moved to town. Miss 'my' woods and critters.
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Ahhhh, another example of your fine talent, country. Thank you. Nice to read with a fire going in the fireplace and a glass of my Hermannhoff White Lady wine Night time, of course with dim lighting and a shawl wrapped around my feet curled up in a comfy chair. You are so 'poetic' . not a pun
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Old 12-05-2007, 07:55 PM
 
Location: Another Day Closer
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LOVING YOU

Hands folded in my lap and staring at the phone
Loving you, missing you, wishing you’d call home
The flicker of the candlelight illuminates the dark
My heart standing like a wick waiting for a spark

Music playing softly in tune with my lonely heart
Like a leaf in the wind slowly coming apart
Blind faith in your love sends my head reeling
Emptiness and loneliness, all that I’m feeling

Knowing you’d call me if there’s any way you could
I still can’t help but wishing that you would
Wanting you, missing you and I know it’s true
I would spend a lifetime sitting here loving you

Loving words on paper, feelings with no place to go
Trying to reach you so I can let you know
My acing heart is waiting for you to claim her
Riding in like a champion, a loving midnight caller

Fingers dial your number, hoping that you’re there
Leaving you a message cause you could be anywhere
Tell you that I love you and baby I’m still here
Feeling sad but somehow glad it still calms my fear

I hear your name as your sweet voice fills my ear
And I tell you that I love you as I hold back a tear
Sweet pain of loving you and not having you near
I’d give up everything I own just to have you here

I guess I’ll take myself to bed and try to fall asleep
I’ll dream of you and hold you with a love so deep
That I’ll convince my heart she’s really with you
And lay there in your arms the whole night through
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Old 12-05-2007, 09:22 PM
 
Location: Moved to town. Miss 'my' woods and critters.
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How Poignant.
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Old 12-06-2007, 04:27 AM
 
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i just arrived at home
and it so nice to hear my children yearn
for my present all day long
and wait for their mama to get home

as i enter the door
i already hear my eldest jumping in joy
as per my youngest shouting like a horn
to my ears and heart
it is always joy to get home.=)
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Old 12-06-2007, 04:37 AM
 
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i am just a newbie in here
this morning i am really want someone to hear
my life story that others think might be very lame
but to me i am in pain

and this time i really feel good
that i can compose anything based in mood
and so i am now happy and feeling good
to find out what can i do inspite of bad mood
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