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Elmer Fudd had stepped in crud while hunting for a rabbit
Daffy Duck said," wtf ? that's quite a nasty habit."
Heckle and Jeckle had lost their sheckel and didn't know where to find it
So they took up stealing which was much more appealing,they didn't seem to mind it.
Popeye choked on the spinach he ate because he didn't chew
Bluto laughed at Popeye's fate and watched his face turn blue.
Likewise! And it's probably better for you, too. Ever wonder why so many little kids act like spinach is poison, to the point of panicking? likely they can smell the oxalic acid, which is indeed not good for a growing youngster as it prevents calcium from being absorbed from the gut. In adults, it can cause kidney stones.
That's a really good, slightly creepy little story, and the twist at the end is just... wicked.
The only grammar mistake I see is that civil should be civilian .... tho you could also say a civil life (as contrasted to a life of panic, like in the war).
Otherwise, this is ready to go. Are you submitting to a print market, or ?? Tho you can make a lot more money with short fiction if you write enough to fill a book and self-publish it.
That's a really good, slightly creepy little story, and the twist at the end is just... wicked.
The only grammar mistake I see is that civil should be civilian .... tho you could also say a civil life (as contrasted to a life of panic, like in the war).
Otherwise, this is ready to go. Are you submitting to a print market, or ?? Tho you can make a lot more money with short fiction if you write enough to fill a book and self-publish it.
Hi Reziac, thanks for your feedback.
I havent really planned anything regarding that little story...but I'd certainly like to publish it with some others I have, I'll just check for online literary contests, I feel very motivated this 2016, becoming an author has been a life long dream.
I write mainly in Spanish, even though I force myself to write in English every now and again to keep an aproach as open as possible.
Money always flows TOWARD the writer. If any outfit asks you to pay up front, it's a scam.
If as you say you're motivated, and your average stuff is as good as this story -- bundle them up and sell them on Amazon. It may take a while to find your market, and it may be a small niche, but hey, that's what genre categories are for.
Yes, I have participated in a few of them. You send your work to a contest, it gets nominated and included in a book with the best ones...you can buy the book from them if you want.
I did participate in such a contest this past Christmas, and my micro-story wasnt even about Christmas, which was the subject of the contest...but surprise surprise, it was included in the book. They didnt even tell who was the winner, if there was a winner at all. I knew it was a trick, but I bought it anyways, cos I wanted to use the book as a gift for a friend...a win-win situation I guess.
I am gonna definitelly try amazon, nothing to lose, thanks for the advise.
Okay, one for the road, that's the stuff I sent:
GONE
He arrived at the clearing early, at one of those hours devoted to sleep for most men. But a lumberjack adopts the pace
of the forest. After a few years, he seems to have bark instead of skin, beard made of moss and sap in his veins. After a
few decades, his human condition is questionable.
He ignored the nightmare that had stirred his night. He dreamed he died and the forest fed on his flesh.
He clutched his ax tightly, and got started. An oak fell after several strokes. And then another. And then another. And
each falling oak rumbled louder.
By midmorning he fell. And then his ax. And the sound that swept the forest was such that a sleepy squirrel
thought that Atlas had split his spine.
At noon a thin rain fell on the clearing, only occupied now by a solitary ax.
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