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Old 01-30-2013, 06:55 AM
 
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Hmmm...how about this fantasy real estate ad?

For Sell:
Hear we have a property located on a very nice culver sack!
This house features trey ceilings, rot iron fencing, jealousy windows, a new roov, an ashfault driveway, and it has alot of upgrades.
This track of land includes nice landscraping and several Oke and Popular trees. The location is very convient to public transportation

You won't loose money by investing in this property, so please contact the owners rite away, because there prolly interested in mooving soon!


Would anyone like to add more detail to my fantasy ad?

Last edited by Retriever; 01-30-2013 at 07:26 AM..

 
Old 01-30-2013, 08:43 AM
 
Location: Sudcaroland
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Originally Posted by Retriever View Post
Hmmm...how about this fantasy real estate ad?

For Sell:
Hear we have a property located on a very nice culver sack!
This house features trey ceilings, rot iron fencing, jealousy windows, a new roov, an ashfault driveway, and it has alot of upgrades.
This track of land includes nice landscraping and several Oke and Popular trees. The location is very convient to public transportation

You won't loose money by investing in this property, so please contact the owners rite away, because there prolly interested in mooving soon!


Would anyone like to add more detail to my fantasy ad?
You forgot about the fashionable stenless steal apply NCs
 
Old 01-30-2013, 09:01 AM
 
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You forgot about the fashionable stenless steal apply NCs

How could I have forgotten about that feature!
 
Old 01-30-2013, 09:09 AM
 
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I am so glad that I work in the medical field. I just had a patient tell me that he couldn't hear very well because he has tendonitis in his left ear.
 
Old 01-30-2013, 10:25 AM
 
Location: USA
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Just read a classified ad wanting to sell a Hardley Davison.
 
Old 01-30-2013, 11:26 AM
 
Location: Sudcaroland
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Just saw this title on CD: "Taking ya gurl to Applebee".
But the answers given to the guy are priceless
 
Old 01-30-2013, 11:39 AM
 
Location: Philaburbia
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Yes, along with rot iron fences.
I have one of those in the backyard. Been meaning to replace it before it falls down.
 
Old 01-30-2013, 11:49 AM
 
Location: Portland, Oregon
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Would anyone like to add more detail to my fantasy ad?
I would like to, but it's inconvient write now. I'm rilly bizzy.
 
Old 01-30-2013, 12:34 PM
 
Location: Victoria TX
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I've noticed that the worst mistakes in C-D occur in the titles to threads. In all fairness, the template for composing a new thread allows a text entry field of only 47-en in the space for the thread title, or less than ten words. So when composing the title, if it is more than a few words, the first words disappear while typing, which makes it a difficult and complicated step to view and proof-read the title before entering. It is possible (I think) for the OP to correct his title later, but I don't think many people know how to do that.
 
Old 01-30-2013, 12:49 PM
 
Location: Land of Enchantment
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Retriever View Post
Hmmm...how about this fantasy real estate ad?

For Sell:
Hear we have a property located on a very nice culver sack!
This house features trey ceilings, rot iron fencing, jealousy windows, a new roov, an ashfault driveway, and it has alot of upgrades.
This track of land includes nice landscraping and several Oke and Popular trees. The location is very convient to public transportation

You won't loose money by investing in this property, so please contact the owners rite away, because there prolly interested in mooving soon!


Would anyone like to add more detail to my fantasy ad?
Are the closets big enough for both our cloths???
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