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Old 05-02-2021, 01:06 PM
 
Location: Georgia, USA
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This was in on a city website discussing ongoing work on a road project: "The contractor will begin shifting traffic on xxxx during paving operations to install multiple asphalt layers that could last for two months.".

Must not be very good asphalt ....

If I recall correctly from English class about 60 years ago, there was a term for poorly formed, unclear sentences. Anybody remember what it was?
The two months is a misplaced modifier.

The contractor will begin shifting traffic on xxxx during paving operations, which could last for two months, to install multiple asphalt layers.

Or, just make it two sentences.

The contractor will begin shifting traffic on xxxx during paving operations to install multiple asphalt layers. The project could last for two months.
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Old 05-02-2021, 04:02 PM
 
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More on those pesky oddly-placed quotation marks:

https://thelanguagenerds.com/30-time...zLh9VgSGXJyS8M
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Old 05-02-2021, 06:04 PM
 
Location: Mid-Atlantic
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But I just chucked it up to getting old.

Upchuck?
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Old 05-02-2021, 06:19 PM
 
Location: Madison, Alabama
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Originally Posted by suzy_q2010 View Post
The two months is a misplaced modifier.

The contractor will begin shifting traffic on xxxx during paving operations, which could last for two months, to install multiple asphalt layers.

Or, just make it two sentences.

The contractor will begin shifting traffic on xxxx during paving operations to install multiple asphalt layers. The project could last for two months.
Yes, either of those is exactly what I would have done (except I think it means the shifting traffic could last for two months).
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Old 05-02-2021, 06:22 PM
 
Location: Madison, Alabama
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More on those pesky oddly-placed quotation marks:

https://thelanguagenerds.com/30-time...zLh9VgSGXJyS8M
Ah, those are great. Do you happen to know where that Starbucks is located?
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Old 05-02-2021, 08:24 PM
 
Location: Mid-Atlantic
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Ah, those are great. Do you happen to know where that Starbucks is located?
Millions want to know.
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Old 05-03-2021, 04:48 AM
 
Location: In a happy, quieter home now! :)
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Wow, you're all so smart.
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Old 05-03-2021, 06:11 AM
 
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my daughter and law got the JJ vac and was nawshus for a day shes fine now
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Old 05-03-2021, 09:31 AM
 
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Less tanker truck drivers are available, meaning more trucks are sitting idle. - local news station doesn't know how to use, "less" and "fewer" correctly

Been Peonizing drivers for decades was a family sustataing job. Now Sow what you Reap. - gosh, this is all kinds of backward.

It was it's own special level of hell. And then today, my kid came to me and ask if all the other kids in his class can come over and join us when we homeschool this summer.

Anybody here about a ATM robbery? - I am here for it.

To all members if you harass any of the admit or members on this group you will be removed from this group I have somebody in harassing me and found her on this group and didn't want her to arrest me on the group so I took her off the group for the time being if you are being harassed by a number please contact one of the admits or myself to report them

They live in their own little make belief world.
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Old 05-03-2021, 09:40 AM
 
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We don't need are freeways redone.
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