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Old 05-17-2007, 02:05 PM
 
Location: Working on relocating
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Everyone is so cool...So many different types of writing and forms of writing! You inspire me

Now, back to work
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Old 05-19-2007, 06:17 PM
 
Location: Coachella Valley, California
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Yeah, I'm somewhat a writer. I write briefs. Does that count???
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Old 05-25-2007, 05:10 PM
 
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This sounds like a good story. If you believe in it, keep at it. Disipline yourself to write 15 minutes every day. Pretty soon you'll have it done. As someone once said: How do you eat an eleplant? Well, one bite at a time.
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Old 05-26-2007, 10:47 PM
 
Location: Another Day Closer
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Default Poetry

I write poetry. I am not published but here's an example.


Willow In The Wind

Too many miles and too many tears
Too many hurts and too many fears
Just too tired from too much trying
Body drained from too much crying

She lacks the strength to carry on
Hopes and dreams have up and gone
And slowly bowing under pressure
Like a willow in the wind

She’s wondering why she even tries
When no one is listening when she cries
She’s only dealing with the aftermath
Of this solitary, windy and lonely path

She walks beneath a gray and broken sky
And tries to reason and understand why
She feels so cold and slowly battered
Like a willow in the wind

Only wishing that she could learn to fly
Feeling warmth of compassion passing by
Have just one reason for her heart to sing
A long ago forgotten and hopeful ring

Feel the warmth of a truly loving hand
Wanted and needed by a gentle man
To lift her up and hold her high
Like a willow in the wind

Doesn’t seem to her too much to ask
This small and meaningful loving task
Just to appreciate how much she gives
Any man’s heart in which she lives

He comes to her in the dark one night
Her heart grows wings and takes flight
Swaying so softly in a gentle breeze
Like a willow in the wind
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Old 05-26-2007, 11:06 PM
 
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One-time poeteer. To be found on a word-of-the-day thread under Other Topics.

Superfluity: Is it free speech? - Other Topics - City-Data Forum (http://tinyurl.com/26k3kf - broken link)

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Some good stuff there NCG. Nice work.

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Old 05-26-2007, 11:16 PM
 
Location: Another Day Closer
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One-time poeteer. To be found on a word-of-the-day thread under Other Topics.

Superfluity: Is it free speech? - Other Topics - City-Data Forum (http://tinyurl.com/26k3kf - broken link)

Some good stuff there NCG. Nice work.
Thank you Tek_Freek. I appreciate your praise
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Old 05-26-2007, 11:25 PM
 
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To be honest not much poetry gets my attention. Yours does. Most poetry is superficial. I thinks yours is heartfelt from experience.
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Old 05-26-2007, 11:31 PM
 
Location: Another Day Closer
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To be honest not much poetry gets my attention. Yours does. Most poetry is superficial. I thinks yours is heartfelt from experience.

High praise indeed. Yes, most all my writings come from my life experiences or those of people I know. Thanks again Tek_Freek
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Old 05-27-2007, 12:16 AM
 
Location: Debary, Florida
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I have often been told I should write a book and I might do just that, more for my own therapy then in the hopes of selling it...

I have to wait for a couple to die first though...
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Old 05-29-2007, 10:07 AM
 
Location: Working on relocating
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IMHO writing from the heart is the best

Hugs,
L
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